NitS Inner Story Done

January 24, 2008 11:33 pm

Earlier this week I finished the first draft of the inner story that sits at the heart of Night in the Sidhe. It needs a lot of editing. There are lots of scenes that are too short where I sketched over the action to get to the end. I’ve started working my way through it taking notes on the various characters, places, factions and events. From these I can write the outer detective story set around the inner story as a detective and a diplomat try to make sense from what, on paper, appear to be the ramblings of a victim of a crime driven over the edge of his sanity. I’ve gotten about a fifth of the way through it tonight but now I’ve had enough for the moment.